Comment 1: peer digital story Nov 6

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vsuHabO2TYA&feature=youtu.be

 

Digital Craftsmanship Command of the media? Was the use of media appropriate, supportive of the story, balanced and well considered? The Digital Craftsmanship is excellent in the video. The media was appropriate and the challenges of living in the city and then moving to the country in the Philippines came through in this story. The story was well considered and  with the events currently happening in the Philippines made this video even more interesting.
Points: 10
Audience Engagement How well did the story capture and keep audience engagement? Was the level of interactivity appropriate to the story being told.  This short story produced in a video was engaging and would be appropriate for most secondary educational settings. The challenges of the transition and hope that a more rural existence will bring more peace and contentment is swiftly left by the way-side the realization that country life brings on it own set of problems.
Points: 10
Originality, voice, creativity How creative was the production? Did the presentation exhibit an original sense of voice and a fresh perspective? This video was excellent at giving another perspective of the Philippine culture and the original voice came through by showing the difficulties of life in the rural Philippines. 
Points 10

Conclusion

I really liked this video and how it showed what life is like for many people in  the Philippines.

Final score 30/30. I would highly recommend short story to any teacher or student who would like to learn more about the world in-which they live.

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